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Tuesday, 29 November 2016

chores writing

We are learning to write a persuasive writing about why we should or should no do chores so this is what I'v got.


I think you should have to do chores around the house because it can help when you're older and when you have your own home or car and you you will know how to keep them clean.


It’s not fair on adults to have to clean up our mess. Mum and Dad might not have much time for you, to play with you. Mum and Dad might have work, and when they come home the house would be messy, and they would be tired, exhausted and angry.


You could earn money or rewards. If you clean up your room, your mum and dad might take you out. If you clean your room you could ask mum or dad if you can hang out with your friends.


When you’re older you can learn how to clean up your house. You aren't lazy when you're older. So you could look after yourself and it can help you get fit.  When people come over they will think that your looking after yourself and the people around you


So in my opinion I am sure that children should be doing chores around the house because then you would like your mum or dad to play with you when they come home and that the house is clean so mum or dad aren’t angry.


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